People who's read it already, how's the whole MC situation? Another isekai, another amnesia, another puny human in a world of big wolves... Probably another voice in the head... Correct me, in case I'm judging it too harshly. How bad/good it's now? What are the chances of MC turning into a simp in the future updates?
It's absolutely nothing like Adastra, that's for sure. Adastra annoyed me to no end with its billions of choices that don't matter at all and then suddenly one choice makes all the difference but only twenty pages later.
idk about MC coming a simp (currently Build 1) but the rest of your assumptions are pretty spot on. Especially mild amnesia, and yes definitely a mysterious voice lol.
I'm loving the first build. The MC is for once actually intelligent, he's almost as good as Rhicter from Lyre which I'm not saying is a bad thing, if he uses is knowledge as a scientist in this world then I'll be satisfied, thou the Pole in the Main Square is making me think magic is integrated in this world, so it'll takes Brynn some time to understand how his world works. The cast so far seem to warm up to Brynn a little too quickly. Calder at the end, wish I could have seen more of him.
Thou this Ominous Voice...not sure what to think of him as yet, I only hope they can live up to the story and please as much as I like it being only males in these furry VN's a few prominent females would be great.
I like how this started. The MC is a promising person (with a personality (which is shocking for a human in a furrysekai)). My only complaint is the *ominous voices* because feels like they'll be a huge letdown for some reason.
Lol, I saw the art the character who's name seems to be Frasier and I immediately thought of Neferu from Adastra, so amazing to see Hops on another VN!
Brynn may not be good as Lyre's Richter but at least his confusion and fear is understandable and he take some action instead of being a total clumsy idiot who's constantly stare off into space as seen time and again in human MCs. It would be a plus if he can utilize his knowledge from his field of science to help to survive the world he's now in.
Fraiser is my favorite and he deserves much as Calder
I love that the protagonist is not some idiot who only observes what's happening and is not a total clumsy mess that makes ridiculous mistakes just for plot points. It's great how he can take initiative without the need of others pursuing him to.
Absolutely love the word choices and really appreciate that the line of thought doesn't get disrupted.
Seeing familiar faces in the team put a smile to my face. Absolutely love the background arts and the sprite work!
All of you did amazing work and congratulations on the first build!
This looks really promising. The protagonist is not a bad written mess, and actually has a personality, I just wish we could learn a little bit more about him, but since that's just the first build I know we can't expect much. The other characters are mostly likable, even tho we didn't get that much about their motivations and etc. Also I can now confirm Skjold is indeed friend shaped, very important information!
Definitely gonna be following this project. Can't wait for the next update.
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People who's read it already, how's the whole MC situation? Another isekai, another amnesia, another puny human in a world of big wolves... Probably another voice in the head... Correct me, in case I'm judging it too harshly. How bad/good it's now? What are the chances of MC turning into a simp in the future updates?
Sometimes it's really exhausting. That's why I'm asking in comms instead of playing: to avoid wasting time on "FBTW 2.0" or "Adastra 3.0".
You could wait for Blaidd Llwyd to do a playthrough narration of it on YouTube.
It's absolutely nothing like Adastra, that's for sure. Adastra annoyed me to no end with its billions of choices that don't matter at all and then suddenly one choice makes all the difference but only twenty pages later.
I hope it's Adastra 3.0 because that would mean the game actually finishes development. And because I love all the tropes you listed.
idk about MC coming a simp (currently Build 1) but the rest of your assumptions are pretty spot on. Especially mild amnesia, and yes definitely a mysterious voice lol.
I'm loving the first build. The MC is for once actually intelligent, he's almost as good as Rhicter from Lyre which I'm not saying is a bad thing, if he uses is knowledge as a scientist in this world then I'll be satisfied, thou the Pole in the Main Square is making me think magic is integrated in this world, so it'll takes Brynn some time to understand how his world works. The cast so far seem to warm up to Brynn a little too quickly. Calder at the end, wish I could have seen more of him.
Thou this Ominous Voice...not sure what to think of him as yet, I only hope they can live up to the story and please as much as I like it being only males in these furry VN's a few prominent females would be great.
Can't wait for more. See yah.
I like how this started. The MC is a promising person (with a personality (which is shocking for a human in a furrysekai)). My only complaint is the *ominous voices* because feels like they'll be a huge letdown for some reason.
Calder's titties man
Lol, I saw the art the character who's name seems to be Frasier and I immediately thought of Neferu from Adastra, so amazing to see Hops on another VN!
Me: Oh, Fraiser is definitely going to get loved up.
*Calder, exists*
Me: Oh.... Oh my god
Brynn may not be good as Lyre's Richter but at least his confusion and fear is understandable and he take some action instead of being a total clumsy idiot who's constantly stare off into space as seen time and again in human MCs. It would be a plus if he can utilize his knowledge from his field of science to help to survive the world he's now in.
Fraiser is my favorite and he deserves much as Calder
Take a shot every time Fraiser winks
the entire comment section absolutely wasted now.....
This is literally so good, the art style, the character designs, the writing, and im really excited for the next build!
I love this so far!
I love that the protagonist is not some idiot who only observes what's happening and is not a total clumsy mess that makes ridiculous mistakes just for plot points. It's great how he can take initiative without the need of others pursuing him to.
Absolutely love the word choices and really appreciate that the line of thought doesn't get disrupted.
Seeing familiar faces in the team put a smile to my face. Absolutely love the background arts and the sprite work!
All of you did amazing work and congratulations on the first build!
what is the species of the protagonist?
The MCi s human
Havent tried it out yet and it looks interesting.
I'm ready to fall in love and get my heart broken by a beastman with a complicated life "^^_ bring it on!
So excited about how things will turn on. I wonder, Can we pick a route from each main character?
From what the team said on Discord, Calder is the main interest but the other two are just eye candy depending on your decisions
Haven't yet got to the game itsled but seeing so many familiar faces in credits was absolutely mindblowing
I like Frasier, he is a nice change of pace from all the big buff love interests (he is still hot of course)
Sweet
finally the song being used right
This looks really promising. The protagonist is not a bad written mess, and actually has a personality, I just wish we could learn a little bit more about him, but since that's just the first build I know we can't expect much. The other characters are mostly likable, even tho we didn't get that much about their motivations and etc. Also I can now confirm Skjold is indeed friend shaped, very important information!
Definitely gonna be following this project. Can't wait for the next update.
Excited to read this tonight! Good job with the webpage design, Azid! ๐