So I noticed a slight issue in text. Towards the end of this update when the MC is talking to themselves about where he would like to hide the book (right after he falls, he curses himself) He calls himself 'Brynn" instead of the assigned name I gave him. That's it though :). Also wanted to say that I'm absolutely obsessed! the writing, plot, art, and music are astounding! It really brings back a lot of heart-warming nostalgia back when Adastra was still a project. Aside from Haps's beautiful wolves, the plot is quite similar. I love it all, and thank you all so much for your hard work! <3
This is a really fun time so far! I popped here when I saw the character design artist who works on Northern Lights was here too and I leapt to try it out.
I have a big complaint to give, the story is highly captivating with the ability to make the reader put himself at the place of it all,almost like a living story.
Now to complaint: i just wanted this to continue without breaking the soothing spell of joy xD. Need more updates!
Are there multiple routes in this? And if there is can somebody give me a quick breakdown of them. Like how many, who they're centered around, and where the split is. I would really appreciate it
No "gay" or "lgbt" tags? Well, that explains why I've only learned about this game's existence from ChoPro (quite happy about it, too). Perhaps you should try adding said tags?
Wow what an amazing update seriously it was worth the wait! Calder is everything I was hoping he would be... that beautiful hunk.
I was surprised by the amount of content in build 2 every time i thought it was about to end there was more, the pacing was perfect. You introduced some great characters and dynamics to both routes that I'm excited to see more of and some story elements I wasn't expecting. this was such a great update.
I love this first build so much. The music was perfect, and I had a blast reading it [not me trying to not remember my unfounded breakdown due to adorable boofer overload].
Im liking the story so far cant wait for the new update/build to come soon. Also when that chubby cutey gaved you the "come on you know you want it" side look with puppy eyes i just lost it, and THAT TEASER at the end OAF!
Enjoying it so far, but the writing needs work. The language feels padded and flowery. Sometimes the wrong words are used as well. The art and sound are great, nice transitions, and the story-line is interesting. But I often have to reread a sentence because of syntax errors or incorrect wording.
I like the kindness and how carefully Skjold was before trusting Brynn. Using his easygoing nature to make MC feel at ease was smart. Would be nice if Skjold can use magic, even if little; since we have a ninja/thief hybrid which is cool.
Would love to see more heartwarming & lore conversation between him and Brynn.
What kind of Isekai are these guys watching to think this is a "generic" one?
It's a bit like the ye olde ones I suppose (beast folk included) but not like the modern cheap power fantasy ones (so far) ... but maybe we had something to do with that crater?
i like what i've seen so far, yeah it's a little bit of a generic isekai in the sense of them getting transported to a mysterious new world and magically being able to speak the native language, but i like that you get to choose which side of the worlds political/moral battle you want to take. at the same time i also feel as though the "voice" was a super generic addition and so far it hasn't added much to the game. you could take the voice out and everything would flow just fine it honestly breaks the immersion for me with how seemingly random the voices interruptions are. but the characters are really good, frasier is super hot but kinda full of himself and skjold is super adorable, i just want to squish his chubby cheeks, he would make the perfect cuddle buddy.
I understand that you wanted to converge the routes together, but Brynn's introduction on Frasier's route is almost comedic solely because his guards had practically given the MC a concussion just moments ago. So the friendly introduction contrasting with the possible brain damage got a laugh out of me.
Either way, looks interesting so far! I love "human isekais" or whatever you'd call this genre, so hopefully this VN doesn't suffer from the dreaded 6-12 month update schedules that tends to happen. I'll be keeping an eye on it for sure.
As for the voice in the MC's head, it kind of seems like the voice thinks the MC's plight is just a game? So that would be a very literal interpretation of an isekai trope, which loves to use gamey stuff. Something like the voice trying to use the MC as a game character like in an RPG or visual novel.
For the MC, I understand these types of VNs are obviously catering to a certain type of bottom, but hopefully you can write him to not be entirely helpless (not saying he is now), as he's supposed to be an engineering? student or something, AKA relatively smart, and is from a highly advanced civilization.
I really like that both Frasier and Skjold are so in opposition morally, one sees the others as a ruthless colonizer who stole their lands and acts as if they're pathetic people and the other sees unjustified hatred when his ancestors were in need of a new place to live in and did their best to protect themselves and the locals, great implimentation of manicheism into the plot.
I really hope tho that the MC will finally try to explain his situation and ask about the world he appeared in by the next build, cause if he's stuck in that area of not knowing anything, that's gonna make him an easy target, so I'm fully ready for the plot to unfold and the world to be build, especially if we can avoid the notion of romance into the mix yet, cause that would kinda ruin the narrative when its barely the start of the journey for our protagonist.
AND I hope we will get an MC that's not just knowledgeable but also smart and cunning, he's in another world where he can get killed just for being alien looking to a planet full of anthropomorphic sentient folks (and even hears a dude talking to him in his head and belittling him, SO might add that he would look insane to everyone), so it would be nice to see him having to survive by using his brain and being independant when he'll get all the informations he need to make decisions and not always depend on the charismatic and sexy love interest to do that for him and, going as far, as patronizing him when the mc is from a more advanced civilization, that would be a refreshing thing to see in a furry vn ^w^
I really like the fact that Fraser and Skjold each have a manichean view and that they may have more in common than they think. I'm curious to see how the plot develops. Personally, I just hope the romance doesn't happen too quickly. It would be more realistic if the MC tried to find his place in this new world first, understand their different cultures, etc.
The bit where the MC stares at Fraser's backside as they are being chased bothered me a bit in this regard. That said, this first version is promising for the future!
when MC stared at Fraiser's ass, I was surprised there wasn't a full screen art of that scene. seemed like a good visual art fanservice moment, hopefully in a later build they add that o3o
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So I noticed a slight issue in text. Towards the end of this update when the MC is talking to themselves about where he would like to hide the book (right after he falls, he curses himself) He calls himself 'Brynn" instead of the assigned name I gave him. That's it though :). Also wanted to say that I'm absolutely obsessed! the writing, plot, art, and music are astounding! It really brings back a lot of heart-warming nostalgia back when Adastra was still a project. Aside from Haps's beautiful wolves, the plot is quite similar. I love it all, and thank you all so much for your hard work! <3
This is a really fun time so far! I popped here when I saw the character design artist who works on Northern Lights was here too and I leapt to try it out.
我想知道游戏后续是否会添加其他情感路线以供玩家选择，我第一眼就爱上了那只胖胖的狼，他真的很可爱，希望后续可以选择关于他的情感路线，拜托这对我真的很重要🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
I have a big complaint to give, the story is highly captivating with the ability to make the reader put himself at the place of it all,almost like a living story.
Now to complaint: i just wanted this to continue without breaking the soothing spell of joy xD. Need more updates!
cant wait for the next chapter
Whew, that first image of calder almost made me choke on my pasta 🥵
Oooh what is this?!
Are there multiple routes in this? And if there is can somebody give me a quick breakdown of them. Like how many, who they're centered around, and where the split is. I would really appreciate it
Oh i just hope we can hug Calder soon! He's such dork i love him so much!! <3
So who are the romance options? I started the game today and was curious whom MC can date :) I actually want to romance Geirr, he is hot ^^
I think the creator said that he only intended for Calder to be the romance option ;-;
i cant wait for the next update X
damn that was good
cute and strong start
It's the way I legit felt an arrow pierce my chest when Geirr took off the visor GODDAMN
I know right? This was the moment I fell for him 😅
Geirr has me down bad
WOW 2nd build is amazing especially the chance to know how they have humans as folklore.....(Please make more :3 I'm intrigued >.<)
it's dumb good
No "gay" or "lgbt" tags? Well, that explains why I've only learned about this game's existence from ChoPro (quite happy about it, too). Perhaps you should try adding said tags?
Wow what an amazing update seriously it was worth the wait! Calder is everything I was hoping he would be... that beautiful hunk.
I was surprised by the amount of content in build 2 every time i thought it was about to end there was more, the pacing was perfect. You introduced some great characters and dynamics to both routes that I'm excited to see more of and some story elements I wasn't expecting. this was such a great update.
Keep up the good work! Hyped for build 3.
Hey! How did you get build 2?
I caved and paid for a patreon sub to get it a month early.
It was worth the 3$.
Music is great, art is amazing, plot (so far) is intriguing, can't wait to see what's next!
I love this first build so much. The music was perfect, and I had a blast reading it [not me trying to not remember my unfounded breakdown due to adorable boofer overload].
weird that the latest devlog didn’t show up in my feed, you might have some weird publishing setting turned on
really enjoyed this :3
Hello, I can't download the game using the itch app, you need to select for each build the corresponding OS to fix that
Should be good now.
thanks :)
what a happy day to be a live a NEW UPDATE I LOVE THIS GAME
Im liking the story so far cant wait for the new update/build to come soon. Also when that chubby cutey gaved you the "come on you know you want it" side look with puppy eyes i just lost it, and THAT TEASER at the end OAF!
Hey, i love how this VN looks, if it continues I would love a hide button for Android to admire the drawing, keep up the good work ;)
so like when can i admire his body closer if you know what i mean ~~
Enjoying it so far, but the writing needs work. The language feels padded and flowery. Sometimes the wrong words are used as well. The art and sound are great, nice transitions, and the story-line is interesting. But I often have to reread a sentence because of syntax errors or incorrect wording.
This is the type 'f constructive criticism that someone needs. People usually just write bad things without giving reasons why.
I like the kindness and how carefully Skjold was before trusting Brynn. Using his easygoing nature to make MC feel at ease was smart. Would be nice if Skjold can use magic, even if little; since we have a ninja/thief hybrid which is cool.
Would love to see more heartwarming & lore conversation between him and Brynn.
What kind of Isekai are these guys watching to think this is a "generic" one?
It's a bit like the ye olde ones I suppose (beast folk included) but not like the modern cheap power fantasy ones (so far) ... but maybe we had something to do with that crater?
All of these people being transported into furry worlds and meeting bulky hot furry men when is it my turn bro
Forever now my own headcannon that those entering a black hole hear the PS2 sound before death
i like what i've seen so far, yeah it's a little bit of a generic isekai in the sense of them getting transported to a mysterious new world and magically being able to speak the native language, but i like that you get to choose which side of the worlds political/moral battle you want to take. at the same time i also feel as though the "voice" was a super generic addition and so far it hasn't added much to the game. you could take the voice out and everything would flow just fine it honestly breaks the immersion for me with how seemingly random the voices interruptions are. but the characters are really good, frasier is super hot but kinda full of himself and skjold is super adorable, i just want to squish his chubby cheeks, he would make the perfect cuddle buddy.
I understand that you wanted to converge the routes together, but Brynn's introduction on Frasier's route is almost comedic solely because his guards had practically given the MC a concussion just moments ago. So the friendly introduction contrasting with the possible brain damage got a laugh out of me.
Either way, looks interesting so far! I love "human isekais" or whatever you'd call this genre, so hopefully this VN doesn't suffer from the dreaded 6-12 month update schedules that tends to happen. I'll be keeping an eye on it for sure.
As for the voice in the MC's head, it kind of seems like the voice thinks the MC's plight is just a game? So that would be a very literal interpretation of an isekai trope, which loves to use gamey stuff. Something like the voice trying to use the MC as a game character like in an RPG or visual novel.
For the MC, I understand these types of VNs are obviously catering to a certain type of bottom, but hopefully you can write him to not be entirely helpless (not saying he is now), as he's supposed to be an engineering? student or something, AKA relatively smart, and is from a highly advanced civilization.
I really like that both Frasier and Skjold are so in opposition morally, one sees the others as a ruthless colonizer who stole their lands and acts as if they're pathetic people and the other sees unjustified hatred when his ancestors were in need of a new place to live in and did their best to protect themselves and the locals, great implimentation of manicheism into the plot.
I really hope tho that the MC will finally try to explain his situation and ask about the world he appeared in by the next build, cause if he's stuck in that area of not knowing anything, that's gonna make him an easy target, so I'm fully ready for the plot to unfold and the world to be build, especially if we can avoid the notion of romance into the mix yet, cause that would kinda ruin the narrative when its barely the start of the journey for our protagonist.
AND I hope we will get an MC that's not just knowledgeable but also smart and cunning, he's in another world where he can get killed just for being alien looking to a planet full of anthropomorphic sentient folks (and even hears a dude talking to him in his head and belittling him, SO might add that he would look insane to everyone), so it would be nice to see him having to survive by using his brain and being independant when he'll get all the informations he need to make decisions and not always depend on the charismatic and sexy love interest to do that for him and, going as far, as patronizing him when the mc is from a more advanced civilization, that would be a refreshing thing to see in a furry vn ^w^
Lawful Good vs Chaotic Good
I really like the fact that Fraser and Skjold each have a manichean view and that they may have more in common than they think.
I'm curious to see how the plot develops.
Personally, I just hope the romance doesn't happen too quickly. It would be more realistic if the MC tried to find his place in this new world first, understand their different cultures, etc.
The bit where the MC stares at Fraser's backside as they are being chased bothered me a bit in this regard.
That said, this first version is promising for the future!
when MC stared at Fraiser's ass, I was surprised there wasn't a full screen art of that scene. seemed like a good visual art fanservice moment, hopefully in a later build they add that o3o